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And then

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Once there was a girl, her eyes were blue, her hair was long, she was born in Baton rouge when she was four her brother was born they fought when they were older, like all children do, and again, as all children do, they fell in love, he with a boy that suited him well and she with a man who caught her in his spell, she was charmed and he kept her mesmerized and called her his wife, but he was a whore, unsatisfied by one he had to have more; soon she was alone , he was a stranger and never at home she thought she did something wrong but it was all his fault then she met a stranger. He said he loved her, but that was a lie, she didn't know he wasn't just another guy in fact he was really quite sly, she believed he loved her....
                                                 And then she died.
Very short, not even a full page long, but that may be because the person taking this shorthand writes very tiny. Also, punctuation is according to my shorthand lady.


So there's a story behind the name because I was telling this story right out of my head to a group with someone taking it shorthand, who thank the gods DIDN'T edit it at all, and there was one person that decided EVERY time I stopped to let the writer catch they would say "And then?" which also explains the way it ends. Yes the girls brother really has nothing to do with the short story, he's just mentioned. Yes her brother is gay, and yes the girls lover, NOT husband, killed her, if you can't pick that much up you are an imbecile.
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